I didn't knew the story was going to be this short but don't take that as a complaint, now that I think about it would have been difficult to extend it too much.
And about the last chapter proper I can't say much other than it was great. We got to see Ann tied up in a lot of ways and we also saw alot of Nissa's villany which is great, there was even some character development for Veniala and her mother which is also really good.
Keep up the good work! I'm eager to read whatever you write next.
Ann's New Family (FF/F) (Finished)
I really wouldn´t mind another Story of Ann and her Friends [mention]banshee[/mention] 
Great work!
Great work!