mrjones2009 : Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
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I know, I repeat myself here. That was outstanding work. I imagine it is not easy to keep such a long story together. Yo did that beautifully. I knew the story already, but reading it a second time, I enjoyed it as much as the first time. More so, that I read more carefully this time. I´m a little bit sorry, that this saga came to an end. But maybe we will read someday a sequel? That would be great. And thank you again, for republishing this story.
The Ending was as good as the chapters before. Personally I would have liked, that Crawford would have got a taste of her own medicine, and spending a lot of time in the bags. But we can´t have it all, can we? I imagine that Crawfords fate was worse than that. But something tells me, we may not have seen, the last of her - revenge is dish, served best cold, as they say.
Oh, and I rellay would like to know, who sent Hayley that text at the end
I know, I repeat myself here. That was outstanding work. I imagine it is not easy to keep such a long story together. Yo did that beautifully. I knew the story already, but reading it a second time, I enjoyed it as much as the first time. More so, that I read more carefully this time. I´m a little bit sorry, that this saga came to an end. But maybe we will read someday a sequel? That would be great. And thank you again, for republishing this story.
The Ending was as good as the chapters before. Personally I would have liked, that Crawford would have got a taste of her own medicine, and spending a lot of time in the bags. But we can´t have it all, can we? I imagine that Crawfords fate was worse than that. But something tells me, we may not have seen, the last of her - revenge is dish, served best cold, as they say.
Oh, and I rellay would like to know, who sent Hayley that text at the end
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Hayley and the rest of the gang will return along with some new faces...……..if I ever get round to finishing the story.
Then I hope for the best and wish you creativity, inspiration and time for finishing Part 4! I know, I know, a little bit selfish here So I will keep fingers crossed!
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One question: I just read Chapter 25 again. When Natalie was restrained fully for 60 Hours: Does that mean 60 Hours wihout food and water or diaper change? Or were there the usual breaks. Just asking
One question: I just read Chapter 25 again. When Natalie was restrained fully for 60 Hours: Does that mean 60 Hours wihout food and water or diaper change? Or were there the usual breaks. Just asking
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Aside from hitting just about every bondage “hot button” I have, this was a truly excellent story! Thank you so much for all the time and effort it must have taken. I’d love to know a little bit about your writing process - how you get from the “one pagagraph outline” to all the detail needed to keep the plot moving, keep “continuity” (I know that’s what they call it in film, not sure if writing uses the same term).mrjones2009 wrote: ↑5 years ago Hayley and the rest of the gang will return along with some new faces...……..if I ever get round to finishing the story.
Either way, thank you again for this story, and hope to read anything else you come up with - whether it involves these characters or others, I am certain it will be fun and hot reading!
I totally agree! To write a Story of this proportions must be quite an effort [mention]mrjones2009[/mention] ! All pieces fall into place here! Good work!Windrunner wrote: ↑5 years agoAside from hitting just about every bondage “hot button” I have, this was a truly excellent story! Thank you so much for all the time and effort it must have taken. I’d love to know a little bit about your writing process - how you get from the “one pagagraph outline” to all the detail needed to keep the plot moving, keep “continuity” (I know that’s what they call it in film, not sure if writing uses the same term).mrjones2009 wrote: ↑5 years ago Hayley and the rest of the gang will return along with some new faces...……..if I ever get round to finishing the story.
Either way, thank you again for this story, and hope to read anything else you come up with - whether it involves these characters or others, I am certain it will be fun and hot reading!
The inclusion of diapers made the story great.
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Hi! Decided to post the final story involving these characters to the adult section.
Link below.
https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f= ... 36#p145736
Many thanks to all those that have read and commented on the stories over the time that I have been posting.
Link below.
https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f= ... 36#p145736
Many thanks to all those that have read and commented on the stories over the time that I have been posting.