Well Sir BFreak, I've now read through to Chapter 134, absolutely amazing detail and character development as always. You are the absolute master in that respect!
Some of my thoughts:
This paragraph from Chapter 131 pretty much sums up the hot, steamy scenes throughout Chapters 120-130 (wow could Steven's oral adventures get any more vividly detailed
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"As much as I adored Nick, I have to admit, his sex drive was a bit too much for me.
Whereas I would've been happy with just cuddling and kissing, Nick was pretty much ALWAYS hard and ready to bone me with that freakishly large cock of his.
The threat of being spontaneously fucked by the muscle-King became a constant weight on my mind.
Yes, it was kinda hot having a super hunky boyfriend who was always hard and horny. But at the same time, just knowing that he could very easily take me by force if I refused him, kinda freaked me out at times."
Police grade leather gloves were made for handgagging... forget whatever function they might have for officers, their PRIMARY purpose for existing is to handgag
I was getting a little preplexed at why Nick discovers rank socks, an athletic cup, and hockey tape in Zach's hockey bag but doesn't use them on Steven!? #@*&?! That combo is perfect for offactory torture and it's right there! The torturous gloves scene in the following chapter partially makes up for it but still, missed opportuniy Nicholas
Finally, just an observation on Steven's and Jeremy's statures. In Chapter 130, Steven observes that his clothes fit Jeremy like a glove and gives him a compliment on his physique. But it's also stated multiple times that Jeremy is a puny 19 year old. Now, looking back at the full body image of Steven in Chapter 123, he has a smoking hot body that would be considered studly when compared to the general male population, imho. Is there a subcategory "below" puny then because I'm fairly certain that's where I reside
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Not meant to be a critique, just an observation as I piece details together.
Looking forward to seeing how my boy Jeremy and my hot stud Zach's relationship develops further, I'm rooting for them but almost want to be an intermediary between the two so I'd get it from the top and bottom, lol
Keep up the good work fine Sir... and I'll eventually catch up
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