Treasure Hunter (F/F) (Finished)

[Caesar73]

Congratulations to a fantastic story with a grandiose finish. The build up of the last Chapter was perfect, you built up the tension slowly. Sarah´s torture, Andreas punishment - then the sudden turn of events! Well done!

[Mineira1986]

At first I had mixed feelings, but actually the resolution of the story is believable. Sofia wasn't the most athletic and strong of the three good girls, so it wouldn't be believable if she jumps in, sorts all kinds of traps and frees her two friends. The way the story was finished is so good because of that. She used her strengths to help Sarah and Andrea. Congratulations for that.

I also like that the story is left open. Not because a sequel is or isn't needed, but because it gives more realism. I really liked it and I hope you can take more requests like this one for your stories.

[roguehorseman]

Loved it, and indeed would love to see the characters, particularity Dana (who I have a major crush on), return sometime...